Note to Reader: This is the second occasion in my life that
I sat down to write one story and a completely different one flowed, unbidden,
from my fingertips, as though I was just an instrument for it to write itself.
I am more than half-convinced that Shoichi Kimura from Found On A Body was a
real person. I wonder if Ahmed from Until
Next Time is – or, more likely, will be.
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The big
man with the pink face smiled at Ahmed and said something in English. He had a
very loud, booming voice.
Ahmed threw a frightened glance over his
shoulder, but none of the other children had yet come squeezing into the room.
He wondered why the big man was shouting, what he’d done to make him angry. It
made no difference that he was smiling. Everyone was always angry at Ahmed over
something or other.
The black-bearded translator frowned at
him. “The gentleman asked you a question,” he said, in Ahmed’s language. “He’s
asking if you want a job.”
Ahmed felt his lips moving. “Yes,” he
whispered, using up exactly one fourth of the English he knew.
The pink man smiled, nodding. He was huge,
and his skin was the pinkest Ahmed had ever seen. It was hard to imagine that
people that pink could exist, apart from Jamshid the albino in the next
village, of course. His shirt was the whitest Ahmed had ever seen, and his tie
had patterns like a peacock on it. “That’s good. I like a young man who’s
willing to earn an honest buck. How old are you, anyway?”
“Fourteen,” the translator said, without
waiting for Ahmed to answer. Actually, Ahmed wasn’t quite eleven, and looked
it, but the pink man nodded and looked satisfied. Everyone hired today would be
fourteen. Fourteen was the minimum age of employment.
“Good. And why are you looking for work?”
The pink man cocked his head to one side and studied Ahmed quizzically. “Tired
of school, are you? The homework’s too much tyranny? The bullies are a
problem?”
There was no school left, of course, since
the teacher had stopped coming. The teacher had used to come twice, sometimes
even thrice, a week, but the local warlord had started demanding he pay a tax
for the privilege of earning his salary. So he stopped coming, and soon after
the school burned down. In the village they said the teacher had come back in
the night and burnt it as revenge. Or maybe it was the warlord.
“He’s done with school,” the translator
said, the standard response. “He’s passed his final exams.”
“So, what about your parents?” the pink man
asked. “Brothers and sisters?”
“No,” said Ahmed, finishing off another
quarter of his knowledge of English. The translator spoke to him sharply and
then turned to the pink man. “His parents are dead.” He didn’t tell the pink
man why the parents were dead, how they’d died. “No brothers and sisters.”
“Is that so?” The pink man leaned forward,
looking at Ahmed with new interest. “That opens up possibilities. Is he eager
to earn money?”
“Of course he is.” The translator didn’t
have to point to Ahmed’s cracked shoes and the torn right knee of his trousers.
“Any money will be welcome.” He licked his lips, calculating his finder’s fee.
The pink man nodded genially. “Well, boy,
we have a job for you. It doesn’t involve much work, but it does need the right
person. Are you ready for it?”
“He’s giving you the job,” the translator
said, frowning at Ahmed. “It’s a job better than those others waiting outside
will be offered. Well?”
Ahmed dredged up the remaining two words of
English he knew. “Thank you.”
“Sir,” the translator ordered. “Say sir.”
Ahmed nodded obediently. “Sir thank you
yes,” he said.
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Ahmed
stood in the middle of the field, waiting.
Far in the distance, to the left, the
village was still waking up to the new day. Woodsmoke hung bluish in the air,
competing with the drifting morning fog. It was cold, and Ahmed hugged himself
as tightly as he could, hoping it would soon be over. He wished he could go
over and talk to Nazneen and Zulfikar, maybe huddle with them for warmth, but
they’d been given strict orders to stand exactly where each one had been told.
Besides, Zulfikar didn’t like it when Ahmed talked to Nazneen, and had once
threatened to break his teeth if he did it again.
There was a droning noise in the east, and
Ahmed sighed with relief as he saw the little yellow plane fly over the low
hills at the further end of the valley. It was coming straight towards him, the
rising sun shimmering on the arc of its spinning propeller. Ahmed had learnt
well enough not to flinch and run as he’d done the first time. He’d been
shouted at and they’d threatened to beat him. Not, of course, that there had
turned out to be anything to run from.
Ahmed saw the white clouds appear from
under the wings, and stood straight and rigid, exactly as ordered, when the
drenching mist fell on him. Today, it had a slight odour, one which turned into
a faint oily taste on the back of his tongue. One time, last week, his skin had
begun itching fiercely and turned red, but there was nothing like that this
time.
The plane reached the end of the field,
turned and flew back slowly, the clouds settling on Nazneen and Zulfikar as
well. Then it rose slowly into the air and vanished over the hills the way it
had come.
Someone near the village raised a green
flag and waved. They could go in and have breakfast, though they were forbidden
to bathe until tomorrow. Once Zulfikar had cheated, and they’d beaten him, and not paid him anything. Ahmed
had rather enjoyed the spectacle of Zulfikar being beaten, because he was a
bully. But he’d taken care to not make the same mistake.
Then, after breakfast, they’d be paid.
They’d, of course be paid only half the amount the pink man had promised,
because the warlord would keep the rest as taxes. And then from what was left
Ahmed would have to give the translator his share. But it was better than
having no money at all.
“Come on!” the man with the green flag
shouted. “Or don’t you lot want your food and salary?”
Ahmed rubbed the mist from his face on the
sleeve of his shirt and began trudging towards the village.
It was over for today.
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One day
Zulfikar wasn’t there. Ahmed and Nazneen walked together to the field and he
asked her about him, because she lived not far from him and should know. She
shook her head so that her brown chador slipped over her forehead and on her
face. “I don’t know. They said he’s sick.”
“Who said?”
“He stays with his grandpa, you know? I
heard that he fell sick last night. That’s all.”
“He’ll probably be back next time,”
Ahmed said. “Do you like him?”
“No,” Nazneen replied, pausing to put on
her shoe, which had fallen off her little foot. “Do you?”
Ahmed shook his head happily. “Do you think
they’ll pay us extra if we got sprayed in his place today, twice each?” he
asked before they parted to go to their separate positions.
Nazneen shrugged. “The warlord would take
it all anyway.”
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They
never saw Zulfikar again. Nazneen said she’d heard he’d died.
“So why haven’t they buried him?” Ahmed
asked, looking in the direction of the little village graveyard.
“I heard they took his body to the city, in
a helicopter.” Nazneen grimaced. “Someone was saying they’d cut him open and
see what’s inside.”
Ahmed was impressed. “I never thought
Zulfikar would ever get to the city, dead or alive. Do you think it’s very
big?”
“Uncle Najib works in the city,” Nazneen
said. “Before the warlord’s men chased him away the last time he came here, he
told me it’s full of people like us sleeping on the streets and waiting outside
restaurants for the garbage to be thrown out in case there’s something to eat
in it.”
But Ahmed wasn’t listening. He was thinking
about the picture of a city he’d once seen, buildings tall as the sky and white
as ivory, streets filled with cars and crowds, beautiful women walking in and
out of the shops. “Someday I’ll take you to the city,” he said, and then, remembering
there was no Zulfikar to take offence, he squeezed her hand.
“Alive, I hope,” she said, and squeezed
back.
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Ahmed
stood in the field, waiting, as the little yellow plane lifted over the hills
and buzzed towards him like a drowsy bee. Today it was flying even lower and
slower than usual, as though it was so heavily loaded that it couldn’t raise
itself any higher. Ahmed wondered if it would come so low that he might see the
pilot, and wave to him, and whether the pilot might wave back. Better not,
though. He’d been ordered not to move at all.
The plane had just come close enough for
the sun to gleam on its wings when it happened. There was a puff of smoke and a
ball of light spiralled up from the ground and rushed up behind the machine’s
tail, to end in a blinding flash of light and a blast of noise so loud Ahmed
thought he’d gone deaf. The plane, suddenly transformed into a blazing,
cartwheeling wreck, tumbled down on the far side of the field, striking with an
impact that jolted Nazneen to her knees, screaming shrilly with fear as bits
and pieces came raining down around her.
Ahmed couldn’t even do that much. He could
not move at all.
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Ahmed
stood in the middle of the field, waiting.
It was a different field, a strange field,
far away from the village. It wasn’t empty either. There was a burned out car
nearby, and the remains of a hut behind him, just the smashed knee high
remnants of a wall. The car and the hut didn’t seem like they belonged in the
field. They looked as though they’d been brought from elsewhere and put here,
like Ahmed himself.
They’d explained to him that after the bad
men had shot down the yellow plane they could no longer give him the same job,
since it wasn’t safe any longer. They’d said other things that he’d not
understood, but they’d told him that if he came with them, they would see that
he was all right.
They hadn’t taken Nazneen though. Ahmed had
been a little sad about that at first, but Nazneen herself had lost all her
interest in the work after the morning when she’d crouched screaming on the
field while burning wreckage fell around her. The evening before Ahmed had gone
with the men, he’d met her out by the mosque, sitting on a stone by the
roadside.
“I’ll be going away tomorrow,” he’d said.
“I’ll come back for you, though, when I’ve earned a lot. Then we’ll go away to
the city together.”
Nazneen hadn’t looked at him. There had
been a large bandage round her forearm, dirty and unwinding at one end, and
she’d tried to tuck the loose end back in, one handed. “All right,” she’d said.
“If you want.”
Ahmed had been piqued. “Don’t you want to
go with me to the city?” he’d demanded.
“If you want,” Nazneen had repeated listlessly.
“So what will you do while I’m away?” Ahmed had demanded. “It’s not as though you
have a job any longer.”
Nazneen had shrugged. “Waqar – you know,
the warlord’s bodyguard – he said he’d give me food and a bed to sleep if I
went to him. He’s a kind man.”
Ahmed wasn’t sure what that was about and
hadn’t asked. “All right,” he’d said, getting up. “I’ll see you when I come
back.” He’d hesitated. “Until next time.”
“Until next time,” Nazneen had repeated.
The last Ahmed had seen of her, she was still trying to get the bandage back
around her forearm, and it had been more unravelled than ever.
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The long,
graceful wings bent at the tips as the drone banked over the airfield, turning
towards the rising sun. Its bulbous, faintly phallic nose moved slightly this
way and that, as though sniffing its way, before settling on a course. Inside
its smooth fuselage, sensors whirred, tasting the ground below for images and
heat traces, the movements of men and animals. Computers took the information,
merged it, made a coherent whole of it, and then sent it two ways. One went
flying back, in a stream of data, to a bunker beneath the base now far away.
The other went a much, much shorter distance, to a computer somewhere in the
drone’s bulbous head itself.
In the bunker beneath the base, a small
knot of men in olive green uniforms, two of them seated, the rest standing
behind them, watched an array of screens. “It’s performing perfectly so far,”
one said, bending over the shoulder of another to get a better look at a
screen.
“Keep your fingers crossed, sir,” the man
in the left seat, who had stripes on his sleeve, said. “We’ll know in a minute whether
the programme works.”
“There he is.” The right hand side seated
man pointed to a tiny dot in the left lower corner of the screen. “Let’s see if
Dragon does as it’s supposed to.”
Without the touch of a joystick, the scene
shifted until the dot was centred. The view zoomed in, and the dot grew arms
and legs, became a tiny human figure standing in front of a wrecked car.
“All going perfectly,” the left hand side
man said, glancing at another screen, which was filled with coloured graphs and
numbers. “Readouts are within parameters.”
“The kid’s not actually going to be hit
this time, is he?” the officer bending over the left hand seat asked nervously.
“Not this time,” the right hand seat man
responded. He glanced towards the officer, not attempting to conceal his
amusement. “It’s a dummy run, just gathering target information and seeing if
it works. You don’t have to worry, sir.”
The officer glared at him, but looked relieved
all the same. “It must be a change for you,” he said, ‘to not actually have to
do anything. Let the drone do all the work, make the decisions.”
The left hand man shrugged, pressing
buttons. Lines appeared on the screen, around the boy. A red glow blossomed
briefly around the little figure, and disappeared.
“That’s it,” he said with satisfaction. “A
perfectly executed mission. Target searched, acquired, and annihilated, all totally
automatically.”
“Until next time,” the man in the right
hand seat said. “Next time we’ll use a dummy missile.”
“Until next time,” the officer whispered.
He watched the dot in the screen recede, and began thinking of his own son at
home. He’d go home on leave soon, and he’d need to buy a present for the kid.
A model drone, he decided. The boy could
have fun assembling it.
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Ahmed
watched the tiny speck fly overhead, the sun shining on immensely long,
tapering wings. He watched it fly over, waiting for the clouds of dew to fall
from underneath, and was mildly disappointed when it turned round and flew away
again. Maybe they would still pay him, though, even though the plane hadn’t sprayed
him. After all it wasn’t his fault
that the plane had flown away, was it?
Next time they might drop something, he
thought, and watched the shining speck fly away into the brightening sky of the
new morning.
Copyright B Purkayastha 2016
I thought this was a heartbreaking story. Maybe not a story at all.
ReplyDeleteMesmerizing -- and, yes, heart-breaking, as Benni says.
ReplyDeleteBill your stories are awesome. The bite of reality looms within all of them.
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